This is the first cut of our trailer that we showed to a few of our target audience and gathered
feedback in ways to improve our trailer as we continue to edit.
Feedback from our audience was:
- Good camera work, our audience said there was a variety of shots that suited the genre and the action taking place.
- Contrast in lighting - especially in the tunnel the lighting and colours was nice and the high-key and low-key lighting created a juxtaposition.
- The purple glow on the text looked really nice but was still soft enough not to be overpowering.
- From the first cut it was clear to understand the genre that the film was going to be and this was supported by the text on screen.
- Good use of many locations that looked interesting.
However what could be improved was:
- The lighting in some places was quite bright and could perhaps be edited slightly
- The opening shot was quite long and could be shortened especially if more clips were going to be added later on.
- It was suggested that we could add a zoom when Arby and Alexia are dancing.
- Could add some effects throughout to make it look more like a trailer.
- Need to add some sound
We both felt that at this time our trailer is nowhere near complete and still we haven't had enough time to film a couple of scenes due to our actors having other commitments. This means that we have had to rethink about our filming for some of our scenes and change around
- Sam
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