Final Trailer

Audience feedback

After completing our final drafts for each text, we decided to ask our audience how effective they felt that each of the products were to establish how much the audience feedback improved our work and here are a few of the responses:


Interview with Rasharn, I used Whatsapp to gain a feedback in the form of a voice note and then saved the file to upload. -

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Interview with Lucy aged 17-



Interview with Brieani aged 17

Draft poster

Draft Magazine cover

After some further feedback from people of our target audience, I decided to go back and make a few amendments to the poster. For this updated version, I made the outline around the sticker to make it stand out more. I changed the font of the cover lines to a more bolder font that stands out more and looks more like a real text. I also changed the font 'Mia King' as because I changed the fonts for the cover lines, I needed to draw attention to the protagonist.

Updated poster

Creating the poster

Editing the film poster from emmalouise01

-Emma

This is Emma's explanation for how she edited and created the film poster.

Audience feedback

Since creating drafts for each of our products, we wanted to get some open feedback from audience members. As a group, we asked four people aged around 16-18 to look at each of our products and then told them to write any comment they felt would help us improve our work, here are some of the comments. We also discussed some ideas in depth and had some suggestions on how to change certain elements. From this, we both feel that this will enable us to improve our texts as getting 'a fresh pair of eyes' to look at your works allows us to pick up mistakes and weaknesses we would not have seen ourselves.